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LOVE AT FIRST SIGHT

P.S. - Please read until the end before drawing any conclusion ;)

 Living in a dark place,
I thought this was my world...
Suddenly I felt a pulling jerk,
And I started feeling cold...
                                                     
                                                   I went into a shock,
                                                   And I started yelling loudly...
                                                   I never knew about this,
                                                   But a voice came out of me slowly...

                                                                                                               I saw few faces staring at me,
                                                                                                              As I was in a strangers land...
                                                                                                              I saw two things holding me,
                                                                                                              Later I knew they were hands. :)

Some people dressed in white,
Took me to a place...
Before I could even know,
I was already cleaned and dressed...
                                                           
                                                    My heart was beating fast,
                                                    And I saw here and there...
                                                    I started feeling pain,
                                                    Thinking why am I even here??
                                                                                                              
                                                                                                         Tears started rolling out of me,
                                                                                                         As the person took me back again.
                                                                                                         And handed me to someone there,
                                                                                                         Whose touch killed all my pain.

I looked above and saw a face,
Which I cant even express...
She looked so pretty and caring,
With a smiling tear on her face...

                                                   An emotional attachment I did feel,
                                                  And I almost knew her..
                                                  She was the one who took care of me,
                                                  Before I even saw her...

                                                                                             A look of her just made me feel,
                                                                                            She loves me so very much...
                                                                                            I wanted to hug her and say back,
                                                                                            That I too love her very much...
This was my first love,
At the very first sight...
Even today I say proudly,
MOM, you are my only light...

I LOVE YOU MOM FOR EVERYTHING,
THAT YOU HAVE DONE...
I KNOW ITS NOT ENOUGH,
BUT I PROMISE TO BE A GOOD SON... :)

LOVE IS TRUE AND UNCONDITIONAL,
THAT IS PROVED BY YOU...
I JUST PRAY MY SOULMATE'S HEART,
WOULD JUST RESEMBLE YOU ;)

LOVE U MOM





Comments

  1. UnknownMarch 18, 2016 at 4:09 AM

    real one....mast heici.....this is the one called LOVE AT FIRST SIGHT.....hota hai per dikhta nahi...no need to express..no need to impress....

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  2. UnknownMarch 18, 2016 at 4:10 AM

    ya,itz true that u have to read till end.....

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  3. UnknownMarch 18, 2016 at 4:48 AM

    Bhai this is awesome..looking forward to more of such stuffs from u.. All d best

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  4. UnknownMarch 18, 2016 at 4:50 AM

    What's so good about this is that the words used are extremely simple n easily understandable..

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  5. MALAYA MOHANTYMarch 18, 2016 at 6:55 AM

    Thanks readers.... ☺

    ReplyDelete
  6. UnknownMarch 18, 2016 at 11:13 PM

    Wow..awesome writing.:) expression of feelings ...combination of words are beautifully Expressing mom's simplicity..:)

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